Turning Yucky Peas into Picture Book Magic. An Interview with Danny Schnitzlein.

I recently spoke with talented children’s author, Danny Schnitzlein, about his successful picture book as well as the craft of writing in verse.

What inspired you to write The Monster Who Ate My Peas?753118

My older siblings hated peas, so I also groaned and threw a fit when my mom served them. I’m not sure if I really hated them, or if I was just following my brother and sister’s lead. But over time, I truly did believe I hated them. My parents wouldn’t let us leave the table until we’d cleaned our plates, so many nights at 8:30 or 9:00 I’d be
sitting there staring at my plate through tears and wishing the peas would disappear. Fast forward, two decades later, someone brought a green soup to a party I attended. I had two bowls of it. Then I discovered it was split pea soup. After that, I really had to re-think my hatred of peas and examine the cause of my fear. Since the book came out, other pea haters (usually adults) come up to me and confess all the devious ways they would get rid of peas when they were kids. So I guess I’ve become a sort of pope of pea confession. You are forgiven! Anyhow, I have examined my fear and I don’t like canned peas. I like them okay if they are fresh or frozen, or especially in Indian food. But not canned. I’m sure that’s way more than you wanted to know.

During school visits, what are some of the more interesting/funny responses you’ve received from students?

I always talk about the importance of re-writing, and how that’s where the magic happens. All the good bits of my stories have happened in the re-writing stage.
When it came time for questions at one school, a boy raised his hand and asked, “Why don’t you just write it right the first time?” If only I could.

I understand a theatrical play was developed from your story. Can you tell us a little about this?

ArtsPower is a really great organization based in New Jersey. They adapt children’s books into plays and perform them at small theaters and schools across the U.S..
I was honored when they approached me about adapting The Monster Who Ate My Peas. Many years ago, I wrote a musical play based on the book and it was performed a few places, but ArtsPower did a much better job than I did. Greg Gunning’s script is fantastic. The acting, staging, and choreography are so much fun. When I saw the play performed in North Carolina, it was very surreal, especially since they named the main character “Danny.” (In the book, the boy is never named.) The play has toured the country several times and it will finally come to my home city next May. I’m very excited!

Your story is written in verse. How difficult was this to accomplish?

My mom read lots of rhyming poems to me when I was young, Also, I was raised on Dr. Seuss books, and I’ve always loved the music of his language. Seuss made writing verse look so easy that people are still trying to copy him many years later. I guess I’m one of those copycats. I’m also a musician and I think that helps when writing verse, because it’s all about the rhythm of the meter, the music of the words. Unfortunately, I think many big publishers have developed a snobby attitude toward picture books written in verse. They don’t want to see those manuscripts. It’s probably because they read so many poorly written manuscripts in verse. The snobby attitude toward books in verse is a trend, but I hope it doesn’t continue. Kids like verse. Adults like reading verse to kids. Verse gives a book a lot of re-play value. We like to hear our favorite songs over and over, and it’s the same with books written in verse, because they are so much like music. Writing in verse is not so hard for me, but it takes a lot longer than writing in prose. The most difficult part about writing in verse, is avoiding the urge to let the verse steer the story. What I mean by this is that you know the first line, but then you have to think up a rhyme for the end of the second line. It’s very easy to just think of a word that rhymes and then use it, and then let the rhyming word tell you where the story is going. But you can’t do that. You have to be in charge of the story. You can’t let the verse make story decisions for you. It’s best to know your story before you begin. Otherwise the story comes out looking very amateur. I only know this from years of experience doing it the wrong way!🙂

For more information about Danny, visit his website at www.dannyschnitzlein.com.

 

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Electronic readers versus paper books: Should we fight the future?

Dr. Roy Benaroch offers some thoughts and advice about reading on e-readers.

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Holly wrote in:

What is your opinion on e-readers vs paper books for kids? My kids have begun to associate reading with something that ‘has to be done for school’ instead of something to be enjoyed, and I’m wondering if letting them read on their tablets would spark new interest. It seems that schools are turning more and more to electronic devices for teaching, so how do e-readers factor into the ‘screen time’ equation? Can reading on a tablet at a young age affect eyesight?

It’s been a long time since reading technology has changed as much as it’s changing now. 2000 years ago moms were admonishing their children to read their baked clay instead of that new-fangled papyrus. Around 1440 Ms. Guterberg gave her one of the first mechanically printed books while her neighbors edged away. 200 years later, Ms. Lincoln…

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Do Books Need Taglines?

As consumers, we’re used to seeing “taglines” for commercials and movies, but do books need pitch lines too? In today’s competitive environment, anything that grabs a reader and gets them to look deeper into your book is worth having. Look at some of these great movie taglines.

Alien – “In space, no one can hear you scream.”1320661
Erin Brockovich – “She brought a small town to it’s feet and a big corporation to it’s knees.”

Finding Nemo – “There are 3.7 trillion fish in the ocean. They’re looking for one.”

Apollo 13 – “Houston . . . we have a problem.”

Armageddon – “Earth. It was fun while it lasted.”

The Social Network – “You don’t get to 500 million friends without making a few enemies.”

Platoon – “The first casualty of war is innocence.”

Shawshank Redemption – “Fear can hold you prisoner. Hope can set you free.”

Get Shorty – “The mob is tough, but it’s nothing like show business.”

These taglines add intrigue to the story and makes you want to read more. As writers we can deliver on the tagline when, most of the time, the publisher delivers on the title. It not only grabs an editor, it grabs the reader. We need to embrace the idea of tagline/pitch lines for children’s books. It’s a competitive world of scrolling through options and the pitch could set us apart.

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Confessions of a Re-Reader — Pub(lishing) Crawl

My name is Kelly and I’m a re-reader. I read the same books over and over again–some books I read once every year–and I love it. My husband doesn’t understand this. He is always reading something new. Sometimes he sees me re-reading a book and rolls his eyes a bit. He has so many questions and…

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Little Known Facts About the Penny?

  1. On the tails side of the penny you’ll find the Latin phrase, E. Pluribus Unum, which means “one out of many”. The Latin phrase was first introduced as part of the Great Seal on August 20th, 1776 just weeks after the signing of the Declaration of Independence. The phrase was used rather inconsistently on coins and emblems, so in 1873 a law passed that required E. Pluribus Unum to appear on all coins when new designs went into effect, and today the motto appears on all U.S. coins.
  1. The first Lincoln Penny was minted in 1909 and it was President Theodore Roosevelt’s idea to honor President Lincoln on the penny. This was the first time a historical figure was pictured on a coin in the United States.
  1. The wheat penny was minted from 1909 to 1958. The design was meant to honor America’s production of grain and was created by sculptor, Victor David Brenner. That’s why some of the oldest pennies have the initials VDB on the bottom. If you have one of these, hold onto it, they are worth more than a penny.
  1. Canada stopped making their penny in 2012. The Royal Canadian Mint is in the process of collecting pennies and melting them down for their metal content. Australia and New Zealand have also eliminated their one-cent coin.
  2. Can the U.S. penny be discontinued? Two bills to “kill” the penny have already been submitted and defeated in congress. Americans are rather fond of the penny but there is growing support in Washington to reduce expenses. The cost to produce a penny varies depending on the price of copper and zinc, but it will never again be less than one cent.
  1. The United States Mint in Philadelphia was the first facility to make official U.S. coins. In 2014, they produced 3,991,000,000 pennies. See www.usmint.gov for more fun facts.
  1. George and Martha Washington donated several pieces of their personal silver to make the first official coins. Can you imagine what these would be worth today?
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5 Ways to Squeeze Writing into Your Life

Writer’s Rumpus posted a few important reminders about making writing a priority. Happy 2016 and may your writing be abundant.

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My life is a tornado.  Sometimes kids, house stuff, homeschooling, church work, therapist duties, chickens, and everything else pull me into a frenzy of activity that I fear I will never escape.  So, how to write?

reminders1. Take advantage of the quiet moments:  There’s always an eye in the storm. The baby is quiet.  The phone isn’t ringing.  The older kids are playing cooperatively. You are doing the dishes and you are alone!  Take this time to write in your mind.  I actually thought of this post today in the car on the way home from a dr.’s appointment.  I got home, typed this up, and voila!

2.Carry a notebook or smart phone with you at all times: Strong winds will carry your ideas away, so write them down immediately! Even if you can’t write hundreds of words a day, writing even one word a day can be inspiring (see…

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Do you have Friggatriskaidekaphobia? Fear of Friday the 13th.

The fear of friday the 13th is very real to a lot of people and it’s called Friggatriskaidekaphobia. The word itself is frightening, but it’s been around for over 100 years and the fear of the number thirteen has been around even longer.

In the early 1800’s, The Thirteenth Club was formed to disprove the fear of the number 13-club-300x276_5_0thirteen along with many other superstitions such as walking under ladders and spilling salt. The club members dared to sit thirteen guests at a table and meet on the 13th of every month. Believe it or not, all members survived.

Even though these superstitions have been disproved time and time again  some people still hold on to those beliefs—just in case. According Stress Management Center in Asheville, NC, approximately 17-21 million Americans suffer from the fear of one particular day. Their fear causes them to avoid their daily activities on Friday the 13th.

Where will you be on this Friday the 13th?

 

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